Problem?
Pacing.
Problem?
Pacing.
Yeah
Holy crap. Lions!
Memories
That happened to me once.
I'd give you a 10...
..If that dragonfly flew into somebody's mouth. I was waiting and waiting for it to happen and break the tension.
Good, but...
Why are so many Holloween submissions popping up on Valentines Day week?
because valentine's day is not a real holiday... it's like labor day or easter... totally fake...
Good job
The first half kinda reminded me of Oregon Trail. Don't ask why. That's not a bad thing. I love Oregon trail. Woulda given a 10 if there was a more complete storyline.
I liked it...
...When it was called Weebl and Bob. But, you could add more of a story and expand on what you have.
WHAT'S WEEBL AND BOB???
CAN SOMEONE PLEASE TELL ME?
I thought I had something original going there.
Yes.
Thank you Alan. You've done it again. Amazing.
Don't look at me. I'm busy avoiding my responsibilities.
Age 41, Male
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Atlanta, GA
Joined on 9/27/03